Zombie Zach

Nov - 30 2016 | By

Mount Jerome Cemetery & Crematorium is situated in Harold's Cross Ref-100427

Zombie Zach lives in the Graveyard. One morning  he woke up  and he ate his nutritious brain cereal. Then he got on his bike and went to the hospital where he did brain surgery.

Unfortunately  he messed  up on his job because instead of working on the brains, he ate one. Then the owner of the hospital fired him.

So he biked back to the Graveyard and got kind of upset. But then he brainstormed and decided to make a hospital where he could make dead people come back  to life.

He was happy and went on a diet from eating brains. He ate vegetables instead.

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  1. Arielle says:

    Hi Evann,
    Very funny story! How is Zombie Zach going to bring his patients back to life?

  2. Connel says:

    Hi, Evann

    It was a really funny story can you make a part 2 please I like the story it is funny.

  3. Heather Gordon says:

    Hi Evann,
    This story is awesome! It’s funny and creative! I like all the twists and turns, and the use of alliteration and repetition. “Nutritious brain cereal” and the final sentence really had me cracking up. You have a knack for effective storytelling and humor. I hope you will continue writing and blogging so that you can share more awesome stories with the world.

  4. Kymberly says:

    Hi Evann,
    Your story was very funny. I thought it was hilarious that your character, who was a zombie, was also a brain surgeon. Your story was well written and creative. I always enjoy stories that make me laugh! How did you come up with the idea of a Brain Surgeon Zombie?
    I would love to read a sequel to this story!

    • Evann says:

      Hi Kymberly, thank you for reading my post. I did a survey of my classmates to help me with the story. I am glad that you liked it.

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